Editing Tutorial

I knew this all along, but I shouldnt’ve been worried yesterday as showing my work was fine. It was a really good experience getting honest, constructive comments and it has reinforced what I like and dislike about my work. A definite advantage of doing Vis Comm is that I learnt a lot about presenting my work and placing it into layouts, and I can see already this will stand me in good stead for this year. Anyway, I think the notes I took will speak for themselves: